apollo16656 发表于 2009-3-5 03:39   全显示 1楼
这个,怎么说呢,我觉得这文章写的有点太象是武林淫乱史了,同样的一开始和母亲做爱,消除了武工上的缺陷,看到现在,我觉得对于人物的塑造方面性格太象武林淫乱史中的罗惊天了,建议大魔鬼大大不要走重复的路子,这样的作品就会缺乏创新,始终比不上武林淫乱史了!!建议多写点主角的挫折,以及慢慢的克服,作品要有点起伏才有看头,太一帆风顺的话,就~~
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