sr19971214 发表于 2020-3-12 19:01   全显示 1楼
个人觉得一个好的肉文是需要剧情的，毕竟要塑造人物，使人物更立体，但描写过多反而让人觉得难受，其实更适合肉文的点缀。前期剧情套路其实很让我有追下去的欲望，作者大大可以在之后作出点改变，期待写出有剧情有h的好作品 (ง •̀_•́)ง
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